http://unisagi.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] unisagi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] major_kerina 2007-07-23 01:41 pm (UTC)

" I hoped it wasn't strong enough that Katsumi couldn't smell it on my hands."

Shouldn't the "couldn't" be "could"?

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