Figured out Chapter 6
Sep. 27th, 2006 02:11 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
major_kerinaAnd I can't wait to get it done and presented. I figured it out last night while laying in bed. It breaks down like this for character time
Nana - Her stock is definitely rising in this forthcoming chapter. She not only gets to present herself and feature in the chapter but I'd have to say, this next chapter is really 'her' chapter in the same way the early parts were Ms. Ishida's time to really reveal herself.
Reiko - She'll definetly get to say more than she has thus far. Not a lot but it's kinda revealing that she isn't quite as long-winded as some of the girls.
Sumi - I think Sumi has some of my favorite lines in this chapter aside from Nana even though she's not in it a lot.
Tara - I love Tara no matter what, even if she has a minimized role for a chapter.
Mami - Like Katsumi, you begin to see her other sides.
Ami - This is not her chapter. I mean I want to put her in it but any more than a small moment would feel wrong, plus I have a good reason for her role to be limited. Don't worry, she'll get more face-time soon.
Aneko (Ms. Ishida) - Felt but not seen. For a busy home-minded person this isn't bad but it means that you'll see her drift into a scene and leave. There's nothing really commanding for her to appear in for a while.
Miki - ok, her role is comparable to Tara's but with how active Miki is, it's a shame she's not gonna be around more but it has been established she's gonna have busy morning so we'll have to wait till she has some free time.
And finally the toughest one...
Katsumi - She just gets only one real scene this chapter but I think it's a pretty good scene because it makes her rather intriguing and furthers some ambiguities to her personality.
And now I must go to the doctor for the last time this week (excusing allergy shots). Be well, love to all. I'll put all my collected ideas down in words when I get back and I might even have something to post of chapter 6 by the end of the week.
Nana - Her stock is definitely rising in this forthcoming chapter. She not only gets to present herself and feature in the chapter but I'd have to say, this next chapter is really 'her' chapter in the same way the early parts were Ms. Ishida's time to really reveal herself. Reiko - She'll definetly get to say more than she has thus far. Not a lot but it's kinda revealing that she isn't quite as long-winded as some of the girls. Sumi - I think Sumi has some of my favorite lines in this chapter aside from Nana even though she's not in it a lot. Tara - I love Tara no matter what, even if she has a minimized role for a chapter. Mami - Like Katsumi, you begin to see her other sides. Ami - This is not her chapter. I mean I want to put her in it but any more than a small moment would feel wrong, plus I have a good reason for her role to be limited. Don't worry, she'll get more face-time soon. Aneko (Ms. Ishida) - Felt but not seen. For a busy home-minded person this isn't bad but it means that you'll see her drift into a scene and leave. There's nothing really commanding for her to appear in for a while. Miki - ok, her role is comparable to Tara's but with how active Miki is, it's a shame she's not gonna be around more but it has been established she's gonna have busy morning so we'll have to wait till she has some free time.And finally the toughest one...
Katsumi - She just gets only one real scene this chapter but I think it's a pretty good scene because it makes her rather intriguing and furthers some ambiguities to her personality. And now I must go to the doctor for the last time this week (excusing allergy shots). Be well, love to all. I'll put all my collected ideas down in words when I get back and I might even have something to post of chapter 6 by the end of the week.
