Aug. 23rd, 2007

"The Very Hungry Caterpillar" needs to be adapted into a monster movie.

*dark opening*
"In the light of the moon a little egg lay on a leaf...."
*chanting music*
*zoom in on the egg*
*cracks open with light streaming out*
*cue zooming text*
George W Bush - "One of my favorite books!"
COMING SOON!!!
"It's hungry..." - tagline
As with so many other Mecchen chapters recently, I think this one is a complete plop. But as I read back a bit, that opinion should improve and I'll whip the narrative into shape so that the climax will flow more naturally. Mostly I feel like I left out environmental details a lot to deal with character stuff...but then that was my intended focus. Maybe it's just a symptom of how unnerved the unraveling of Mecchen and Ogawa makes me feel. Things will never be the same but this uncertain, worrisome time will pass. Thank you for reading. I'll have the chapter out for everyone to read soon ^_^

I swear...

Aug. 23rd, 2007 08:56 pm
In the book version of Men in Black (cut from the movie)...there's this anti-theft device on K's MIB car which any authorized people touch it and turns them into a pile of dust. At the end of the chapter, James (J) discovers it's really really dusty around the car.

I'd love to put a couple hundred of those with broken windows in cities all around and let's see how much dust blows around.

I don't even fucking care to zap people like that. It's too good for them. Put them outside corporate offices too. I'd love to add in a pain element that the dust is silently screaming all the while too until it becomes part of some plant or something when it settles. *growls*

That's it. I'm really ticked. I needed to vent about this...

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