Chapter 8 - Written!
Oct. 24th, 2006 03:33 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Total - 8000 words +
I might have to add to that. We'll see. I haven't figured out. There's some stuff I rushed through and I might go back and add to it. I only used a few of the questions people suggested and I'd like to incorporate maybe one more.
Also I decided to take what was going to be only chapter 8 and move the end of chapter 8 and turn it into chapter 9. Also I gave chapter 8 a better title. Before it was "Recipes at Mecchen House" (that's chapter 9 now). Chapter 8 was retitled "Messages Away from Mecchen House" I'm quite happy with this because I think I really started to dig at what's going on behind the scenes in a way that was subtle before but now you can really see that something is afoot. Chapter 9 will be more ensemble than this one where there's at most the three boys plus one at times.
Editted version coming when my homework gets done tomorrow (well probably later but I'll start on it tomorrow).
I might have to add to that. We'll see. I haven't figured out. There's some stuff I rushed through and I might go back and add to it. I only used a few of the questions people suggested and I'd like to incorporate maybe one more.
Also I decided to take what was going to be only chapter 8 and move the end of chapter 8 and turn it into chapter 9. Also I gave chapter 8 a better title. Before it was "Recipes at Mecchen House" (that's chapter 9 now). Chapter 8 was retitled "Messages Away from Mecchen House" I'm quite happy with this because I think I really started to dig at what's going on behind the scenes in a way that was subtle before but now you can really see that something is afoot. Chapter 9 will be more ensemble than this one where there's at most the three boys plus one at times.
Editted version coming when my homework gets done tomorrow (well probably later but I'll start on it tomorrow).
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Date: 2006-10-24 02:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-10-24 02:56 pm (UTC)In "Chronicles of the Whitesword Maid", I'm kind of tempted to turn that first chapter into three.
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Date: 2006-10-24 06:14 pm (UTC)